I am a red ball
bouncing inside a dark box
up down and side to side
in circles and at tangents
trying to find the light
I will not stop
bouncing off these walls
till I find my way out–
If there is one.
Written for dVerse Quadrille #48 on the prompt ‘bounce’. Would love to hear what you think about it and what meaning you derived from his poem.
Escape – Quadrille #48
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9 thoughts on “Escape – Quadrille #48

  • January 28, 2018 at 8:14 am
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    Red with constructive anger and bouncing with ideas, every one should try to broaden the boundaries of existence! There is always a ray of hope waiting for the soul in dark.
    What a profound poem Namratha! Admire you for your command on your thoughts and ability to translate it in such a pithy way!

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  • January 17, 2018 at 11:23 am
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    Keep at it…it may be closer to getting out than it seems…and it will be funnnnn! A nice write☺

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  • January 17, 2018 at 7:15 am
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    Someone, please take the lid off and let that beautiful, happy ball bounce freely so we can all have fun with her!

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    • January 17, 2018 at 1:00 pm
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      I second that. I actually wrote this keeping a person I know in mind, who is facing a lot of obstacles but fighting her hardest to keep positive and have hope.

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  • January 16, 2018 at 10:52 pm
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    Ooh, I dig this. I hope the ball never stops bouncing. What a cool little box, if such exists, that can keep a ball bouncing inside it forever.

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    • January 17, 2018 at 1:02 pm
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      I hope so too. The ‘cool little box’ idea is a whole new perspective

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I would love to know your thoughts! Speak to me

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