Monsoon rain paints me
elaborate messages
on pane. Mystery!

Written for Haibun Monday at dVerse. Thank you to Björn Rudberg for the wonderful prompt. Sorry, haven’t been able to access the laptop all day, so wrote a haiku instead.

Haiku on “Water”
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5 thoughts on “Haiku on “Water”

  • October 23, 2017 at 9:46 pm

    Indeed a mystery ~ Looking forward to the prose part, smiles ~

  • October 19, 2017 at 12:06 am

    I agree. The prose part would have been nice. Every other Thursday is Open Link Night in which you can submit any poem of your choice if you can’t make the full portion of the prompt.

  • October 17, 2017 at 9:36 pm

    Cool message and fun way to look at the dripping water. Did the prose part of you Haibun disappear in the rain? LOL

  • October 17, 2017 at 8:04 pm

    I like the idea of the rain painting messages on the window. I hadn’t thought of it like that before.


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