You are the sun in my eyes

Blackhole-ing life

As I floatsink into your abyss

Reality fades to a dull pale grey


This time I am sure

I am the captain of this ship

I can ration my exposure

I can step off on my will

(sadly mistaken)


You touch me like none other

a total eclipse of my senses

sometimes the fog clear a bit

gives me hope, (I shall find myself again)

but at the edge of your precipice

reality plummets to its death

until it is just you and me

you are my straight-jacket rainbow

everything outside is a flat line.

– an addict in denial



untitled – poem – nanopoblano

3 thoughts on “untitled – poem – nanopoblano

  • November 9, 2018 at 3:34 pm

    Lot of push and pull with emotions in this one. Confidence and uncertainty, the beauty of love but the darker side explored of it as well. Intricate, delicate and breath taking at times.

  • November 4, 2018 at 11:02 pm

    this one really resonates with me. so many powerful visuals and feelings swirling here

    • November 4, 2018 at 11:06 pm

      Glad it did. Thanks for reading


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